雅思寫作長難句方法。不少考生都不會長難句,下面是我們收拾的雅思寫作長難句方法,歡迎閱讀!
雅思寫作之怎么樣通過長難句加分
1,雅思寫作中長難句會加分么?
高分的寫作需要大家有語法的豐富度,也就是時態(tài),語氣與語態(tài)的結合,此外還要有多變的句式結構
其中,復雜句是最能考驗一個學生語言功底的句子,正確的構造一個長難句對于考官來講,無疑是一個高分閃光點。
eg.Many schools are eager to hire experienced employees.
eg.Many schools are eager to hire employees who possess the organisational skills needed tocomplete the duties associated with teaching.
但這并不意味,所有些句子都得由長難句來完成,長難句是起到畫龍點睛之筆,偶爾也需要短句來調節(jié)考官的閱讀步伐。
因此,可以負責任的說,長難句的存在對于作文分數(shù)的提升有著至關要緊有哪些用途。
2,長難句分為哪些種類?
是否字數(shù)多就是長難句啊?
我是否要把主語的頭弄大一點
萬一寫個長難句還有語法錯誤,還不如不寫了
沒語法錯誤,全寫小短句我也可以拿高分吧嘿嘿
我敢一定不少烤鴨都有以上掩耳盜鈴或者天真無邪的想法。但在這里需要指出的是,長難句不同于簡單句,即要有復雜的句式結構,而不止是字數(shù)的限制。
所謂英文的復雜句,從本質上來講不過就是兩個簡單句和連詞的疊加。
基礎結構為:
+主+謂+賓++主+謂+
當然亦可以通過“嵌套”出更為復雜的復雜句,但一般高分作文的復雜句只含有一個主句和1~2個從句及少量短語,再輔以簡單句和并列句。
Take it easy,大家并沒變態(tài)到到叫你寫出3、4個從句的長難句。
細分一下長難句的類型,可以主要分為以下幾種
1.主句+從句
比如:Some citizens take it for granted that environmental problems should be resolved by government alone without any personal effort.
2.倒裝,強調或者虛擬
比如:Strange as I may seem,parent's attention sometimes hinder student's academic performance in school.
It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person's personality and dictates how that personality develops.
If sufficient sky train and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities,then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.
3.長句加短語的結合
比如:Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology would be effective stragegy for improving air quality,especially in cities.
4.用連詞進行列舉
比如:Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply,for exampleby installing exercise equipment in parks.
3如何寫出正確的長難句
依據(jù)第二部分給出的長難句類型,
目前大家來仔細研究一下句子的主要框架結構。
1.主句+從句
賓語從句:someone take it in account
someone take it into granted
it 作為形式賓語
高檔定語從句:及物動詞/介詞 +the extent to which+句子
eg.The government must consider the extent to which environmental problems can be resolved.
主語從句:That+句子+makes it+adj+to do sth /句子
eg.That the government invests more in arts,like music and painting makes it possible that the cities and town will become a more attractive place to live in.
非謂語結構:Given +名詞/ Given that+句子
eg.Given that most young couples are too occupied to cinsider having babies,it is therefore imperative that they put off their parenthood.
2.倒裝,強調或者虛擬
倒裝:Only...can.https://www.engpx.com/Not only...but also.https://www.engpx.com/Be it...or
強調:It is...that.https://www.engpx.com/It is...who
虛擬:If...were...,...would...
3.長句加短語的結合
比如在句子后面加入限定成分especially in citits/coutries/modern society, both in cities and on motorways, in this respect,ect.
eg.A person needs to fell that they are doing valued and valuable work,so positive feedback from superiors is very important in this respect.
4.用連詞進行擴展
比如用such as,for example,instead of,as well as 等等
eg.Being a celebrity—such as a famous film star or sports personality—brings problems as well asbenifit.
※in terms of,for the sake of ,regardless of 其實也是復雜句的三大絕活。
比如:
This children are often spoilt,not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have time for this.
......for the sake of their healty
regardless of price
怎么用雅思寫作長難句
1、防止空洞的單詞和詞組
一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不可以為句子帶來任何有關的或要緊的信息,完全可以被刪掉。
譬如:When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.這句話當中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都看上去多余。完全可以去掉。還有的空洞和繁瑣的表達方法可以進行替換。比如:Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。“due to the fact that”就是一個非常典型的繁瑣的表達方法的例子,可以替換。
2、防止重復用同樣的詞語
防止重復用同樣的詞語或者有些時候雖然詞語沒重復,但意思卻有重復,這個時候可以做一些簡化。譬如:The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.large對一個farm來講就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉。
3、選擇適合的語法結構
選擇適合的語法結構可以使句子意思的表達更為精確和簡練。雖然語法的多樣性也非常重要,但選擇最適合的語法結構仍然是更為要緊的考慮原因。一個句子的主語和謂語動詞應該可以反映句子中的非常重要的意思。譬如:The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.從意思上來剖析,上面這句話需要表達的要緊的定義是“grandfather's not being able to study”,而在表達這個定義時,原句用的主語是situation,謂語動詞是was,不可以強調需要表達的重點定義,可以改為下面這句話:My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
三個雅思寫作高分方法推薦
雅思寫作高分方法1、 防止空洞的單詞和詞組
1. 一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不可以為句子帶來任何有關的或要緊的信息,完全可以被刪掉。譬如下面的句子:
When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.
這句話當中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都看上去多余。完全可以去掉。改為:
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2. 有的空洞和繁瑣的表達方法可以進行替換,比如:
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help
their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at
this point in time.
“due to the fact that”就是一個非常典型的繁瑣的表達方法的例子,可以替換,簡化為下面的表達方法:
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.
雅思寫作高分方法2、 防止重復
1. 盡可能防止重復用同樣的詞語。或者有些時候雖然詞語沒重復,但意思卻有重復。這個時候可以做一些簡化的工作。比如下面這個例子:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large 對一個farm來講就是size方面的large,所以in size可以去掉,改為:
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更簡潔的表達方法為:
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2. 有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡單的單詞來替換,比如:
My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。
這里的over and over again就能改為repeatedly,看上去更為簡潔:
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.
雅思寫作高分方法3、選擇最適合的語法結構
選擇適合的語法結構可以使句子意思的表達更為精確和簡練。雖然語法的多樣性也非常重要,但選擇最適合的語法結構仍然是更為要緊的考慮原因。以下原則是在考慮選擇何種語法結構時可以參考的原則:
1. 一個句子的主語和謂語動詞應該可以反映句子中的非常重要的意思。比如:.
The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study
engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.
從意思上來剖析,上面這句話需要表達的要緊的定義是“grandfather's not being able to study”,而在表達這個定義時,原句用的主語是situation,謂語動詞是was,不可以強調需要表達的重點定義,可以改為下面這句話:
My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
2.防止頻繁用“there be”結構,比如下面的句子:
There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改為:
My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更簡潔的句式為:
My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
3.把從句改為短語或單詞。比如:
Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers
from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.
介紹的表達方法為:
The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
4.僅在需要強調賓語而不是主語的時候,才用被動語態(tài)。比如:
In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.
本句不夠簡潔是什么原因本句的重點應該是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather's family”,而用了被動語態(tài)后,仿佛重心變成了cows和hay。下面的表達方法是主動語態(tài),相對來講更簡潔一些:
In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.