1.由港澳國際投資公司投資的?？陔娬竟こ桃蚱浣ㄔO速度和水平得到高度評價。
原譯文：The Haikou Power Station Project invested by the Hongkong-Macau International Investment Co, Ltd. was highly appraised1 for its construction speed and quality.
注：投資某項工程應為invest in a project，在被動語態中不可以漏去前置詞in.應譯為：
The Haikou Power Station Project invested in（在某些狀況下可用financed or funded） by the Hongkong-Macau International Investment Co., Ltd. was highly appraised for its construction speed and quality.
2.上海SFECO擁有5個控股子公司。
原譯文：Shanghai SFECO Group has 5 share-holding companies.
注：share-holding company指控制或持有某公司股權的股東公司。上述譯文意思是5個公司持有Shanghai SFECO Group的股份，換句話說，這5個公司是老子公司，因此顯然不符合中文原意。
應譯為：
Shanghai SFECO Group is a holding company of 5 subsidiary companies. 或Shanghai SFECO Group holds shares of 5 subsidiary companies.
3.中國民生銀行公司
原譯文：China Minsheng Banking2 Corporation, Ltd.
注：corporation本身即為公司，等于limited company，英譯中不需要再加Ltd。應譯為：
China Minsheng Banking Corporation
4.項目中標之后，大家將立即開始前期籌備工作。
原譯文：After the bid is awarded, we shall immediately start our advance-phase preparation.
注：項目中標應為accept a bid or award the contract.顯然上述譯文把兩種表達法相混淆了。應譯為：
After the bid is accepted （or the contract is awarded）, we shall immediately start our advance-phase preparation.
5.歡迎你參觀大家買賣會
原譯文：Welcome you to visit our fair！
注：譯文中welcome是動詞，因此此句是祈使句形式，省略的主語為第二人稱你（你們），而不是中文所含的我（大家）之意。應譯為：
We welcome you to visit our trade fair！
更簡潔而地道的譯法是：Welcome to our trade fair！